Session3

I’ll say! More muscly than Amalaric’s norm. The pic in the living room! Woof!

Fred’s personality is consistently amusing me, with his prissy entitled self-pampering. I’ve met any number of wealthy single gay airheads like him. Love the narrator’s tone, tooling along complaisently with […]

Maybe I’m too repressive, Richard. GBF is kinkland and you’re a wonderful writer who should feel absolutely free to fly to your own kink. (But if you tell me that not only all five men but Kimberley and Muffy, […]

So well written, and darkly, sardonically humorous. Tickling happens not to do it for me, either, but that just means that this story is designed for a different audience. It’s also clearly designed to groove on […]

I’m liking it very much, too. As guys go who are being extorted by threat of a public outing, the narrator is about the luckiest a man could in such a situation. Howie’s played completely fair, and “brought his […]

Well, no WONDER you don’t much writing done, bro! Your picture’s so fierce hot, you must spend 75% of your day coping with come-ons and another 10% staring in the mirror, unable to believe your own luck. Next […]

This reads like a seriously fine novel by a imaginative, sure and subtle artist. Really beautiful. The indolent entitled narrator’s mindset, the mindless dehumanizing bigotry he and his family share, and the […]

What is it about rectitudinous superheroes going down that amuses us so? Poor Greenie here, guzzling drugged water all night cluelessly, unable to discern (A.) that he’s been massively drugged and (B.) that hot […]

Seems to me the second clip is from (or an outtake from) the sequel to the movie Hostel (Hostel II?). The scenario matches, the man looks very like Roger Bart, which tallies, and that film had a resourceful […]

mchelperin is such a sharp writer. The characters so sharp, the details so imaginative (a rusty boat trailer as a rack? Perfect.). I never miss one of his stories here (and no, I’m not “him in disguise, touting […]

Sure liked this simple story. Perfect writing. The extended Judd/Stone sex scene was A+++. Pictures hot, too. Thanks. Biker rape could have been twice as long, richer in detail. I get it about keeping a short […]

Funny, funny, funny. Loved the frottage mixed in with the nip and pit work (but that’s just me). I was surprised that there was no hot descriptions of cocks except that one reference to Gambino’s length. I cum […]

Good story. Love where the narrator’s coming from. Great writing.

The tormented soldier is Canadian actor Max Thieriot. Great performance by him in the film Disconnect as an teenage “online sex performer” pulled between a woman reporter and his pimp. The film has three loosely […]

Maybe clean up a small editing error. On this “Page” Jesse steps out of his jock just before skull-fucking Mike at the chin-up bar. But then he steps out of his jock again just before fucking Mike. THIS STORY IS DYNAMITE.

Sly beyond sly! Perfect!

Great, and nice and sexy right through. Charles is one hot stern Daddy. In the first twenty-five minutes of their basement encounter, Charles ties Dan up, unties, reties…. It struck me that a street tough […]

“…his chaste nose…” I’m laughing out loud at every paragraph.

I think so, too. The bouncer’s a believable “type,” unable to admit he’s gay, but using nasty physical aggression as a “cover” to get what he craves. Only unlikely thing here is asking us to buy that a gay bar […]

Nice work. The Daddy’s steady low-key talk seems undramatic at first, but as his inflictings multiply, that same unemphatic “Done it all before, Son” tone is a nastier and nastier signal. Loved “I kept thinking […]