I'm very pleased to present this hot new torture series by Donald Steve featuring artwork by the very talented Amalaric! The series follows the painful ordeals of Matthew Fry, a captured soldier who suffers often brutal treatment in an interrogation unit operated by his captor, Colonel Grey. The character of Fry was inspired by a friend of the author and this story was written in his memory based on their real-life roleplay scenarios. Enjoy!


Afghan Hell: Part 1 - Capture
by DonaldSteve
Art by Amalaric
Series: Afghan Hell

Mathew Fry was dragged from the helicopter to come face-to-face with the self styled Colonel Grey. He knew instantly that he was at the interrogation unit that the Scottish guy headed and ran for would be interrogators from across the world. Grey looked at the tall and muscular 27 year old from PEACEHAVEN and said “Well laddie, it is a great day for everybody in this camp. They will be very happy to meet you at last.” He looked towards the men that had come out to view the ‘copter. “I personally have been waiting for this day for a very long time. Two years of you and your organisation’s meddling in my affairs. You personally have caused me huge financial loss. You have also caused me the loss of several of my best men. I can’t let you get away with that laddie and you are now going to have to pay for that in the worst way you can imagine." Fry struggled against the men holding his arms. “If I had my way I would shoot you on the spot, but I have my men to answer to. They are mainly Afghans and they demand revenge” He looked over at the men by the gate that, realising the actual identity of the prisoner were jubilant at his capture. “Their race accepts punishment. It is a fact of life for them and if they had their way you would be over there now staked out, probably being slowly flayed and you would very soon die” His gaze returned to Fry. "What a waste that would be.”

Grey spoke with a thick guttural Glaswegian accent. Despite his ruthless reputation he was an amiable looking man with a humorous mouth and a glint in his eye. "I run an interrogation unit here and we are always looking for subjects to demonstrate on. You and I are going to get to know each other over the next few weeks. We will meet most days and you will suffer.”

Fry pulled at the hands that held him. "All of this for killing a few of your men? Don’t make me laugh, Grey. You and this mob here have slaughtered thousands.” He laughed humourlessly. “What a hypocrite. The fact is you get your kicks from killing and torture.”

Grey looked like thunder but calmly replied. “No wee man. I need to keep my men happy. They lost a lot of their friends at your hand and they want to see you punished.” He put his hands on his hips and slowly circled Fry. “Your organisation PEACEHAVEN. What is its motto?” he pondered theatrically. "To stamp out torture and oppression throughout the world.” He laughed. "You are the hypocrite laddie. You and your organisation, because you use any means at your disposal to get your way too. You laddie have tortured. You tortured one of my men to obtain the whereabouts of this camp. Luckily you were caught in the act and brought here.” He looked at his captive. “So the tables are turned my wee man. You must have known that one day you would fall into my hands.” He pondered for a moment. “I would happily give you a quick death but my men want revenge. They know I can do it in a better way than they can. That I can make you live for a very long time. That my ways are subtler. If I handed you over to them you would certainly suffer but in a day or two you would die.“ He looked Fry up and down taking in the powerful strength that his bulky clothes could not hide. "I also want to see what makes you tick. On top of that, you may not be a Scot but an English voice is better than nothing. And I have not heard one of those for four years. Reason enough to keep you alive I think laddie.” He gave a big smile, but his words were chilling. “I can promise you lots and lots of punishment. Day after day, until you beg me to stop.” He look straight at Fry with his intense blue eyes “But Matt, ma we laddie, I can promise you I won't stop.”

He studied Fry, his gaze sweeping over him. At his bound hands, secured in front of him. They were large and well shaped. The whole of their backs were covered in short spikes of course blonde hairs that grew quite long as it spread on to his wrists and Grey’s concentration wavered as he wondered just how hairy this guy's arms were. “As you know I run the interrogation unit from this camp. I think you will make an ideal specimen. All the prisoners in this camp are part of the learning process for my students. They are usually involved as part of my experiment for interrogation. Questioning and similar things like that. But you.” he said with a smile. “You will be special. You will be the subject for the more persuasive techniques. The next input of students is in four days time and you will be my first real guinea pig. I have several engineers and carpenters in the camp” he continued. “When I don’t have a specific item or structure to hold or restrain a guy they will make it. From tomorrow they will work on several structures that will accommodate you. I don’t mean just your cell where you will be confined, but things to tie you to in the most uncomfortable ways. We also have the expertise to create implements of torture” He looked across the compound and turning back to his prisoner smiled again. “Until they are ready with the torture instruments we can make do with what we already have. At the moment I am too busy to deal with you because the students are coming and I have to prepare everything for them. So until they arrive I will hand you over to my men. See what they can do to you. But they have orders on the pain of death not to mark you in any way and to keep you safe and well for my lectures."

“We will definitely meet in the classroom. Probably in four days time. But in the meantime I may visit you. Get to know you a bit before that.” He flicked his head at the guards. “Off you go laddie”



  1. Amalaric - June 5, 2016, 2:04 am

    Hot damn- it looks awesome!!! Many thanks!

  2. donaldsteve - June 5, 2016, 3:58 pm

    Many thanks to you and Amalaric. You have given my story new life and brought it to a wider readership. This the kind of scene that turns me on and I hope it is received well by like minded people.

  3. scotts60143 - June 16, 2016, 7:13 am

    Great beginning. Looking forward to chapter 2 and seeing more of Matt! Thanks to DS and Amalaric.

  4. jawtop - November 16, 2019, 1:13 pm

    Hot story!

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